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All is Well 1/?

Posted on 2008.05.21 at 10:12

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Bryoney
bryoneybrynn at 2008-06-08 17:30 (UTC) (Link)
Oh, I love AU. It's almost always shit but this seems really promising (that's a compliment, by the way, in case it didn't sound like it! lol) I really enjoyed your writing and oh! Harry wanting James's attention/approval just pulled on my heart. I loved Sirius struggling with his domesticity (that line about the death knoll of his youth cracked me up) and this made me laugh: </i>Merlin's teeth, Harry, argue with me and I'll drag you down to Knockturn and sell you for parts," Sirius said </i>. Sirius does the exasperated 'parent' so well!

I really enjoyed your re-write of the exchange with Draco in Madam Malkin's and the glimpses of Harry's normal life interactions with the other kids. I'm hoping I'll have time for part two later this afternoon - yay!
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